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Nice drawings
Questioning structure, spanning is quite large, at the top I don't see structure
Flee market barcelona good precedent for open structure
Missing opportunity for structure explanation - didactic structure
How is the steel grounded - next challenge to tackle
External truss??
Rendering needs to link to environment diagram
Good hybrid
Floor plans need some work, understands the concept, discuss floor plans more;
Add columns to corners - corners are important for structure
Light steel structure is the character to go with
3d more detailed then 2d
could have communal bathrooms for the apartments, make it feel even more like a house
Takeaways
Work on structure for steel. Light steel structure is the way to go. Can place columns at 10m spans where existing breaks in space are with the CLT structure. How is this then grounded? Pad foundations?
Work on plans for apartment block. Furnish kitchens and sort out bathroom placements. Get rid of interior splitting walls for bedrooms 1 and 2.
If there are toilets in every apartment for the shared accommodation, the students sacrifice space and outdoor balconies. Using shared toilets means we can place 2 within the spaces and have a more house feeling place.